First Chapter Critiques

First impressions matter, and your opening chapters are your best chance to hook the reader.

Hi. I'm Jinx, a developmental editor specializing in romance and fantasy. With this service, I'll read your opening chapters from both a reader's and an editor's perspective. I’ll leave in-line comments to share my immediate reactions as I read through the manuscript, and I'll also suggest improvements if I notice areas that could be strengthened.

Along with the comments, you'll receive a 2 to 3 page report where I'll gush about the parts I loved, speculate on where I think the story might go, and provide general feedback on topics such as:

• Opening Hook

• Characters

• Description & Setting

• Pacing

• Writing Style

• Magic Systems (if applicable)

• World-building & Lore

This is a great way to make sure you’re on the right track with clear prose, a strong voice, and characters that readers want to follow.

Investment: $40 for up to 8k words.

Turnaround time: 3 - 5 days.

Learn more about me and my qualifications.

Think we're a good fit? Contact me and let's work together!